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Zeth

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Eyes open mind fogged.This is how Zeth is used to waking up.With his average 4 hours of sleep he hits the snooze on the loud buzzing alarm.Zeth closes his eyes and trys to remember his dream,all that comes to view is a girls smile and the night sky.The dream recap comes to a hault when the when Zeth's alarm starts wailing again.Seeing the time he decides another tardy wont help his already groggy depressed mood.After his ritual hunt for clean clothes his outdated MP3 player and back pack he jogs down stairs.

"Your going to be fucking late again Zeth!" wails his father from the recliner.

Zeth ignores him and thinks to himself "your gonna be a fat cunt again dad!".

Zeth's father may be un-employed but he does a fine job of exacerbating Zeths already bad moods.
Still being a very fimiliar morning Zeth sprints full speed to his bus as its pulling away from his stop.Barely able to keep up he hits the bus door 3 times until the driver finally stops for him.
Climbing on trying not to make eye contact at the laughing students he heads for his usual spot at the very back.Throwing himself down into the seat he pulls his hood over his head.

"Ever heard of an alarm clock Zeth?"Says a pale boy.
"I have one John" Zeth murmers
"What crawled up your ass and died?"
"I put your stupid hamster up it"
"Well cheer up,Its your lucky day"

John opens his back pack and pulls out a pencil case.

"oh boy howdy I fucking love me a good pencil" Zeth says with a grin.
"Your such a fucking smart ass"John says as he throws the case into his lap

Zeth grin widens.The pencil case contains enough mushroom for two people to trip all night.

"how did you get this?" Zeth says in a whisper

In hushed voices John explains how his older brother from college deals it.

"well that figures he is majoring in business"

Zeth pulled his hood over his head further and putting his hands in his sweater pockets to sheild himself from the icy wind before he steps off the bus.Right as he does he gets a surprise hug

"Zeth!"

Zeth hugs the girl back and instantly forgets his late start morning,his useless father,his run for the bus,Johns drugs,how cold it is.All that matters to Zeth right now is that this hug never stops,That the warmth of this girl never leaves

"Good morning love"Zeth says with a warm smile.
"morning Zeth"Says the girl
"Hey Ellie,I had a dream about you."
"Did you dream I looked better?"
"Not even my sub conscious can improve perfections"

"Hi John"Ellie says
"mornin Ellie"

Zeth and Ellie walk hand in hand,while John walks next to the couple.
On the way Zeth tells Ellie about his dream.

"Your dream just might come true"Ellie gives her biggest cheesy smile.
"your cute Ellie"says Zeth
"nope"Ellie says out of reflex
"You guys are an odd couple"John says laughing.

Reaching there usual morning hangout secluded from most of the school they sit down on the cold concrete and lean against the building.After talking amongst themselves discussing music,weeked plans and various drugs.the bell rings.When Zeth and Ellie get done giving there byes to John.They walk together to first period.

"I hate our art teacher shes such such a christian bitch"
"I know but shes quiting after christmas break.Probably because of you"
"its not my fault the idea of columbine happening scares her"

It was a pretty routine morning in art 3-4.Jus another day of working on portraits.

"Your really good Ellie"
"nope"
"yeah thats why your in art 3-4 as a freshman and doing a better job then me"
"nope"
"Look at yours,its done really well"retorted Ellie
"nope"Zeth says with a smile
This is the beginning of my fantasy story.Ive never tried writing a story before.Critiques are welcome
© 2009 - 2024 imduval
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Nightstar-27's avatar
This is a good intro, very interesting